Kiaora koutou,
Ko Char toku ingoa
Ko Puhangatohora te maunga
Ko Tahekeroa te awa
Ko Ngatokimatawhaurua te waka
Ko Mahuri te marae
Ko Ngatipakau te hapu
Ko Ngapuhi te iwi
No Whangrei ahau
Ko Taina-mere toku tuakana
Ko Kiarn rawa ko Neihana oku tungane
Ko Rangitkina toku whaea
Ko Damon toku matua
No reira, tena koutou, tena koutou, tena koutou katoa.
WE. SEE. VEGETARIANS. ON. ICE.
This is what we use to help us during writing.
These are the keys to good writing.
WE - Word choice.
CAN - Conventions.
SEE - Sentence fluency.
VEGETARIANS - Voice.
ON - Organization.
ICE - Ideas.
He toa taua he toa pahekeheke he toa mahi, he toa mau tonu.
A champion warrior's life is un-predictable, but a champion worker lives on
This is a proverb all about excellence. I chose this because I thought it would
suit the virtue of excellence this term. People spend their time in the spotlight,
but it is only fufilling if they had worked hard to get there.
Kiaora koutou,
Ko Char toku ingoa
Ko Puhangatohora te maunga
Ko Tahekeroa te awa
Ko Ngatokimatawhaurua te waka
Ko Mahuri te marae
Ko Ngatipakau te hapu
Ko Ngapuhi te iwi
No Whangrei ahau
Ko Taina-mere toku tuakana
Ko Kiarn rawa ko Neihana oku tungane
Ko Rangitkina toku whaea
Ko Damon toku matua
No reira, tena koutou, tena koutou, tena koutou katoa.
WE. SEE. VEGETARIANS. ON. ICE.
This is what we use to help us during writing.
These are the keys to good writing.
WE - Word choice.
CAN - Conventions.
SEE - Sentence fluency.
VEGETARIANS - Voice.
ON - Organization.
ICE - Ideas.
He toa taua he toa pahekeheke he toa mahi, he toa mau tonu.
A champion warrior's life is un-predictable, but a champion worker lives on
This is a proverb all about excellence. I chose this because I thought it would
suit the virtue of excellence this term. People spend their time in the spotlight,
but it is only fufilling if they had worked hard to get there.